Obsidianflame//Thunderclan

[~Lynx~]

Name:Obsidianflame

Age:22 moons

Rank: If the Thunderclan Med cat position isn't already taken?

Appearence:Obsidianflame is an orange,white, and black calico tom with long front claws. His eyes are a maple green that reflect beautifully with the sun.

Personality:

Obsidianflame is a wise tom with much knowledge of Starclan. He is oftenly quiet and keeps to himself unless he must speak. To many cats surprise he does have an unusually sharp tongue for a Medicince cat. It's rare that he is cross, but he can be a fierce cat at times. Oterwise he s a very tender hearted cat.

[*<|/~.::Snowfur::.~\|>*]

Hey there! I'm Snowfur, here to critique your bio. You need a bit more appearance, like, a chunk, xD, and just a few more sentences in personality. Also, I'd like you to give me a roleplay example and a little history. Who were Obsidianflame's parents? What happened when he was an apprentice? Things like that. Do that-and I think I can accept this! ^^